This video is getting closer to what we want in the finished product, but the beginning and end still need some sculpting. As you roll through the end of your raw materialthe final moments of video Christopher shotyou'll see a few more cutaways and finally a wider shot, an establishing shot, of the group painting. The video doesn't need the cutaway shots (although you could experiment by dropping short bits into the scene), but it does need the wider shot. There is precious little material shot from a distance to give the audience any sense of where we are or the overall relationship between the girls sitting and painting.
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